Wednesday, January 05, 2005
Poem: Wooden Heart
Wooden Heart
Would that my heart was wood!
My heart would smell honey sweet
and scented sawdust fresh
And be filled with
spirals and swirls
and circles
It would have sticky sap for blood
My heart would be coated in gruff bark for protection
Wish my heart was wood
I would mark my years in cirlces
In songs of oak
In dreams of verdant green leaves.
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9 comments:
Very nice poem, but not sure I wish that. Just think of poor Pinochio :P
Cristina, glad you liked! No, I don't wanna be a puppet lol
Writersblock, thanks a lot for your comment. I am glad you liked it :-)
Best Wishes
La Luna.
Hey, you poet! Do I wish that my heart was wood? Sometimes I'd be glad if my heart was icy-cold ...
Thanks for the comment! No, I would never wish my heart was ice or stone for that matter. I want to LIVE and FEEL. Even if it means feeling pain then I would rather that then feel nothing :-)
Best Wishes
La Luna
luna,
nice...
snaps are awesome i had to support my jaw...:)) please keep them coming
thanks for visiting:)
fish and chips
uber
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed! I will keep the photos ( and the poems ) comming! It's my intention to have something new here everyday! Hopefully I woon't burn out! :-D lol
Thanks for visiting too. I'll sure sure keep on going to yours. I'll put you in my links along with a couple of other good blogs I found soon!
Regards
La Luna.
What a lovely poem...
I've tried to write poetry, but it always ends up sounding forced. I think it's because I'm trying. :)
The idea of smelling honey and sawdust is alluring to me. I imagine it would be very pleasant.
Thanks for the visit and the comment! :-) Yes honey and sawdust are two wonderful scents!
Best Wishes
La Luna.
Ah! - us ladies admire a man with a "heart of oak"! :D
M
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